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« Thread Started on Nov 2, 2008, 2:05am »

(Originally posted to my LiveJournal under http://gurdymonkey.livejournal.com/tag/tanka+challenge )
I've been hearing about this fuss about NaNoWriMo and finally decided to look it up.

The following lines stick in my mind like acid coated skewers:

"Valuing enthusiasm and perseverance over painstaking craft...."

"....the ONLY thing that matters in NaNoWriMo is output."

"You will be writing a lot of crap."

Now I'm having flashbacks to the semester I was required to read one of Trollope's abominable quota-written novels, Barchester Towers.

Acid coated skewers of schlock notwithstanding, I know how to force myself to write intensely.

Can you think of anything more antithetical to the concept of writing a 50,000 word novel in 30 days than the discipline of coming up with one 31-syllable poetic gem a day?

Here's the concept - because I suspect some of my readers will want to jump on the old ox cart too:

Write one tanka (waka)* a day.
*Resources on tanka:
http://www.ahapoetry.com/TANKA.HTM
http://www.americantanka.com/
http://www.wodefordhall.com/heianpoetryjam.htm

Since I got this idea and posted this very late on November 1, one may opt to do a double entry to bring your total to thirty for the month, or you may skip November 1 with no penalty. This is the only date you get to double dip or skip on. The spirit of this poetic form being the impermanence of this dewdrop life, no other make-ups are permitted. If you miss a day, you miss a day and as in real life, you can never get it back. (You're on the honor system here....)

No limits on subject matter other than any you chose to impose upon yourself. Hopefully, some moment in your day will inspire you to write about it.

If you write more than one tanka a day, fine. However, you may not carry over tanka to other days except for the November 1 grace tanka. You have to write a poem on each day.

(If you are inspired to "answer" someone else's poem, great. Personally, if I do so, I am not going to count it toward my daily assignment. The idea is to come up with something myself each day. What you do is up to you.)

Adherence to the 5-7-5-7-7 line/syllable count is required, otherwise it's not a tanka.

It's poetry, not stereo instructions. It should say something and it should make sense.

No rewrites.

A thousand raindrops
Dance madly against the roof,
Teasing and taunting.
Within there is no dancing,
Only one with memories. (11/1/08).
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じ .......... What would Sei Shonagon do? Chronicle all your shortcomings for posterity.

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« Reply #1 on Nov 2, 2008, 2:30am »

Yay, another supporter of NaNoWriMo!
i shall take your challenge makiwara-dono along with my usual work on a series of novels i write.
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« Reply #2 on Nov 2, 2008, 10:14am »

Noble Cousins!

Greetings from Solveig! I suppose that if you are really ambitious, you can undertake something akin to Ise Monogatari. Basically, write a prose "introduction" before each tanka. Ideally, the whole thing becomes a connected story with interspersed poetry.
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Nov 2, 2008, 10:14am, solveig wrote:
Greetings from Solveig! I suppose that if you are really ambitious, you can undertake something akin to Ise Monogatari.


You want to write Solveig Monogatari, go right ahead.

I am writiing the Anti-NaNoWriMo: 30 days of poetry, no narrative structure required.
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« Reply #4 on Nov 2, 2008, 12:54pm »

Is she in mourning
In sleeves of grey upon grey
Tinged with blue and white?
To the east, the sky's sad hems
Drag themselves across the hills. - Saionji no Hanae (11/2/08)
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« Reply #5 on Nov 2, 2008, 2:47pm »

Draping silken hems
over the plains and mountains
cold, chilly embrace
The branches now are barren
no flowers to sooth the eye.

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« Reply #6 on Nov 2, 2008, 3:08pm »

I'm new, I've been lurking on the SCA-JML list, but a tanka challenge IS enough to get me to peek out.

Gray softness lies low
against the brown mountainside
crowding out shadow -
fallen leaves pile up, too wet
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Drop petal by soft petal
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Nov 2, 2008, 3:08pm, knittingknots wrote:
I'm new, I've been lurking on the SCA-JML list, but a tanka challenge IS enough to get me to peek out.


Welcome, and may I congratulate you on an excellent effort!
(Mwahaha, my evil plan is working.....)
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お .......... Life is short. Eat dessert first. - Fujimaki Tosaburou Hidetora

じ .......... What would Sei Shonagon do? Chronicle all your shortcomings for posterity.

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« Reply #8 on Nov 2, 2008, 4:03pm »

Green shoots peeking through
rounds of nurturing brown soil
look so delicate.
But lean your nose closer,
ah yes, no doubt, they're garlic.
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« Reply #9 on Nov 2, 2008, 6:11pm »

Nov 2

Trinity purrs loud
Purring on my chest and thigh
Fresh from my catbox
"I was Good, mom, see? I'm good!"
My shirt smells now of cat ass
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indian sun comes
it brings hate and destruction
children scream loudly
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homework finally over
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« Reply #11 on Nov 2, 2008, 6:17pm »


Nov 2, 2008, 2:30am, Water_Tengu wrote:
Yay, another supporter of NaNoWriMo!


If you read Makiwara-hime's post I think you will find that she does, in fact, NOT support NaNoWriMo.

She says "Can you think of anything more antithetical to the concept of writing a 50,000 word novel in 30 days than the discipline of coming up with one 31-syllable poetic gem a day?"

Personally, I will do my best to rise to her challenge, to create clever nuggets instead of "an abominable quota-written novel".

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« Reply #12 on Nov 2, 2008, 6:38pm »

Nov 1 (backlog)

Warming soup smells sweet
Of beans, of herbs, of fresh squash.
Community joins
In a cold warehouse for love
To help those less fortunate.

This evening I and my in-laws went to a fundraiser held by a local potter and a community activist. For a $15 donation, you could pick out a hand-made bowl (made and donated by the potters at the studio) and eat soups provided by several local caterer and restaurants. All donations went to the Crispus Attucks Soup Kitchen.
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Nov 2, 2008, 6:17pm, kurokamakiri wrote:

Nov 2, 2008, 2:30am, Water_Tengu wrote:
Yay, another supporter of NaNoWriMo!


If you read Makiwara-hime's post I think you will find that she does, in fact, NOT support NaNoWriMo.

She says "Can you think of anything more antithetical to the concept of writing a 50,000 word novel in 30 days than the discipline of coming up with one 31-syllable poetic gem a day?"

Personally, I will do my best to rise to her challenge, to create clever nuggets instead of "an abominable quota-written novel".



oh, i suppose you are correct, but we are all supporting the holiday in our own way. as for me an my novel writing i just use NaNoWriMo to motivate me to work on my own series, Accurate Inaccuracy. because having a good reason to write will motivate me to. i usually get about a quarter-of-a-book done per year.
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« Reply #14 on Nov 2, 2008, 7:27pm »

*hides* I never post, I'm such a chicken...and I'm not sure I counted the syllables right, and not sure if they are supposed to be titled or not *winces*...*Deep breath*...

Visions of Fall

Sun, shining brightly.
Clouds, running across blue skies.
Wind, weaving a web
of grace through a leaf filled maze.
Visions of a playful Fall.
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