Comment requested: Japanese rapier page (draft)

[Saionji Shonagon]

I've hit the point where it's become a blur and I need fresh eyes to look at it. wodefordhall.com/japaneserapier.htm

Comments welcome. Does it make sense? Do you think you could knock together a shitagi based on the pattern? Did I mistype something or leave words out?

Thanks!

Saionji no Hana

[roninpenguin]

Besides some HTML issues with the images at the beginning I think it works well.

[Saionji Shonagon]

Recently updated to include rebuild on my fighting fan. http:www.wodefordhall.com/japaneserapier.htm