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Post by Otagiri Tatsuzou on Sept 29, 2005 14:29:20 GMT -5
Mine missed the mark ... let me try again
Fallen leaves stirred up kicked down evergreen slopes Torrent of color Pale in the predawn light Yoshitsune rides his horse
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Saionji Shonagon
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One dreamed of becoming somebody. Another remained awake and became. (Found in a fortune cookie.)
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Post by Saionji Shonagon on Sept 29, 2005 19:44:02 GMT -5
I dunno, I liked it.
Ours haven't even begun to turn yet!
He bears his master Through bright hued rivers of leaves Splashing round his hooves. Eyes roll, he snorts defiance At the breezes of autumn.
Saionji
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